Well, I came up with an interesting guitar figure & an intriguing first line. Probably caught your attention, but then lost it after you realized it wasn't going anywhere. At best, it could be a lesser movement on some 2nd-rate prog band's aborted concept album. That said, if anyone has a 2nd-rate prog band, please do something with this.
lyrics
This is the one
This is the one where I die
This is the one
This is the one where I try
When I am done
When I am done I will…
This is the one
This is the one
This is the one where we win
This is the one
This is the one again
This is the one
This is the one where I die
This is the one
This is the one where I wonder why
Jody Stephens of Big Star and Luther Russell of the Freewheelers team for a radiant LP packed full of slide guitar and pop smarts. Bandcamp New & Notable Sep 11, 2019